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The Breakup

Her eyes were blank
Staring at the dagger
Deep within her soul
Unmoving, uncaring
Shattered the peace
Of her unfinished life
Her energy spilled from
The protected center
He was no longer there
Apart from her forever
When would she ever
Feel hope again?

By Shadowleoparddreams
© 6.5.09
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Another sunny day, so I have a new dark poem. ;)

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:iconvaledhelven:
Strong writing, my friend, but I am worried about you... I'm around, if you ever wanna talk, okay? :cuddle:
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:iconshadowleoparddreams:
Thanks sweetie. I am okay, don't worry. I just have dark moments. I am sorry if I worried you unduly. :hug:
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:iconvaledhelven:
That's okay - you're allowed!... just don't do it too often :cuddle:
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~midnightstorm45044 Jun 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice! I love that you write darkly on sunny daysXD I probably would too:shrug:
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:iconricky4:
Short and sweet,strong and powerful! Luv it! :nod:
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:iconshadowleoparddreams:
I am so glad you like it. :dance::blowkiss:
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*mynoahsart Jun 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sunny days are great... writing dark can be any day...
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:iconshadowleoparddreams:
Thanks. I am glad you feel like that. I wish there weren't so many dark "days", oh, well.
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